I tried to leave lots of room for narration but there were so many characters I had to work into this page (like one guy we haven't seen since page 50)
Nicholas, I think the page looks great, I think that you could shrink the size of your letters down. They could be read easily 1/2 of that size.The page is very balanced and the placement of the words is spot on but they take up a lot of space.
Thanks. Next chapter I'm definitely reducing down the size (along with some other changes) I'll reletter the first three chapters and maybe spruce up the art when I get the chance.